1 [Report This]Date: May 29, 2019 06:36 pm Title: The Morning After
Comfect this story is so wonderful! I especially love this part:
"On the one hand it felt like divine revelation, like clouds of fire by night and smoke by day, like tablets at Sinai and an empty tomb on Easter Sunday. On the other, it was just the natural order of things: waking up one day and discovering your parents are aging, or your little sister is a woman now, and forgetting to be surprised by the news because today is not actually any different from yesterday; you’ve just noticed it now. "
I mean if that doesn't explain how Pam Beesly probably lives her whole life, I don't know what does. There is such a beautiful blend in this chapter of dramatic exit and subtle nuance that are, again, so very in-character for Pam. Really wonderful.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you DC! You picked up on my favorite line I wrote in this, so thanks, that really warms my heart.
1 [Report This]Date: April 16, 2019 06:19 pm Title: The Morning After
Ahhh this was so cute!! Pam’s final line had me rolling! It makes me wish Larissa had been in the actual show because this is exactly how I imagine her. Loved every second of Pam and Jim in this one. Fantastic fic!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm always delighted when people share my Larissa-feelings, because I enjoy writing her in so much. Thank you for reading!
1 [Report This]Date: April 15, 2019 06:07 pm Title: The Morning After
Great chapter! I like that Jim is just all in. No doubts or anger about the situation.
Author's Response: Yeah, I think night-after Casino Night Jim would be much more willing to accept Pam's about-face than embittered, months of solitude in Stamford Jim ends up being in S3. Hope so at least! ;) Thanks for reading!
1 [Report This]Date: April 12, 2019 11:25 am Title: The Morning After
Loved it!! Strong!Pam is the best Pam.
(Can I possibly suggest a second chapter in which she knocks on Jim's door?)
Author's Response: You read my mind! I hope you enjoy chapter 2!
1 [Report This]Date: April 11, 2019 12:40 pm Title: The Morning After
This was great! I like how it all just crystalized for her in the moments after she woke up. Please write more on this!
Author's Response: Thank you! I don't intend to leave this unfinished, so I will definitely be writing more! Thanks for reading :)
1 [Report This]Date: April 11, 2019 11:02 am Title: The Morning After
Aww, Comfect! Thank you! Yes, I'm very interested.
Great way to start out here too. During the packing scene all I could think of was, "is she still wearing her Casino Night dress?" And low and behold, yup she is. Nice touch.
Once again your ability to get into a character's head is on point. That Pam is able to come to all these realizations and fire back at Roy was wonderful to see. Eagerly looking forward to more.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're interested! This will be a shorter fic, but I figured something new needed to come out on your birthday...