1 [Report This]Date: May 29, 2019 07:05 pm Title: In the Driveway
Such a great chapter! We get to experience so much in a short space. When you got here, I really really feel in love with chapter:
"She looked up at him, seeing the naked emotion in his eyes..." Just everything here and after was wonderful and sweet and delightfully funny.
Author's Response: Thank you! I tried to make these pack a punch, and I'm so delighted they did that for you!
1 [Report This]Date: April 15, 2019 06:15 pm Title: In the Driveway
This was a lovely way to start wrapping things up. And I can't wait to see them break in into DM.
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope the breakin meets your expectations :)
1 [Report This]Date: April 15, 2019 03:55 pm Title: In the Driveway
This was so great. I loved the way Pam and Larissa instantly connected here. It's great to see that as the door to her old life is closed, the door to her new life with Jim and his friends and family is so warmly opened.
However I think the sweetest line was just before they kissed. Where Pam feels his stubble and "he was still wearing the face that kissed her last night." Very nice image there. That even though Larissa, Mark, and Gerry are standing right there, it all melts away. I loved that Pam realized she needed to be 100% clear this time around. No chance for misinterpretations or the like. She's direct and honest not only with Jim but with herself and the reward for her honesty is something brighter than she could imagine.
The prank planning was a lot of fun as well. Great chapter, not that I'd expect anything less. Looking forward to seeing how you wrap this up.
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you enjoyed the wrapup just as much. This is, after all, your present.