1 [Report This]Date: October 08, 2020 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 4: A Day Alone
I love Pam taking advantage of the consequence-free world to flirt with Jim. Poor guy. Mind fried right there, and then he had to spend the rest of the day alone with Dwight.
Author's Response: Thank you! I had a lot of fun with her reaction to the changed stakes of her world.
1 [Report This]Date: May 10, 2019 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 4: A Day Alone
This is my absolute favorite chapter so far because I love Healthy-Selfish Pam. That moment in the library where she pulled at the brochures was so quirky and beautiful and I love it and I'm not at all secretly going to beg for there to be some sort of link back to that Stamford, CT brochure.
Really, just Pam doing what PAM wants to do is lovely and I 100% believe this is how she would show herself some self-care. Well done, man. I can't wait to see where you take this story.
Author's Response: There will be a lot of healthy-selfish Pam and yes, the Stamford brochure 110% will make at least one reappearance. Thank you for reading!
1 [Report This]Date: May 04, 2019 02:37 am Title: Chapter 4: A Day Alone
I can’t get enough of this, honestly.
At the end of each chapter I’m always thinking “Okay, what’s Pam gonna do next?” And in each chapter I’m pleasantly surprised
It’s really interesting to see the way you’ve interpreted Pam, and how you’ve shown her discovering what’s going on.
Another really great chapter :)
Author's Response: I hope you keep being pleasantly surprised! Thank you so much!
1 [Report This]Date: May 03, 2019 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 4: A Day Alone
I’m loving that she’s doing things a little differently with each re-do of the day. That line in Ch 2 from Jim about Roy not seeing pretty faces was just perfection - I’m still thinking about it after reading two more chapters. I’m glad Pam has gotten a glimpse into Roy’s true colours. I’m loving all the subtle ways that you’re revealing that Pam is very in love with Jim, even though she doesn’t realize it in those moments. Can’t wait to see how her next re-do pans out!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm hoping to be at least a little subtle with this even though we all know where it's going, so I appreciate hearing that it's working!
Date: May 03, 2019 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 4: A Day Alone
That was a different take on what I thought Pam would do. However I do like it. To her mind she's got all the time in the world, so why not make the most of it? I like she's figuring out just how much she let Roy take over and how much she doesn't want it to be like that anymore. She wants to start exploring who SHE is rather than who Pam and Roy or Pam and Whoever is. Great to see. However I think she'll have to head back to the Booze Cruise at some point. Still this was a nice break.
Author's Response: I didn't want to be too too predictable, but I'm very glad this worked for you. I'm interested to know what you think going forward.
1 [Report This]Date: May 03, 2019 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 4: A Day Alone
I liked a lot how Pam got to be herself - and discuver herself - in this chapter. And it got me wondered, what would I do with a Groundhound day (I haven't seen that movie). Thanks a lot for a great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! I recommend the movie (some of it has aged not so well, but it's done better I think than most 1980s comedies...and it's a great story idea).