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Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2019 02:04 am Title: Chapter 8: Stamford Connecticut

Well, I wondered what trouble Pam would get up to with Stamford as the destination. Poor Karen? On another note, I love that Pam is thinking of life beyond Roy & seems resolved to ditch him, no matter the outcome of all this groundhog-ing.

Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate your continued feedback along the way :)

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2019 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 8: Stamford Connecticut

What would I do? Check for any problems with airway, breathing, or circulation. Check for any life threatening injuries, check for broken bones, try to splint what I could, prep for transport, and then transport to the nearest ER, in case you're wondering. Thanks for the shout out there. You didn't get anything wrong with just having Pam stand there and watch.

Lots of great stuff this time, even for a non-Booze cruise cycle. I really liked how Pam made breakfast for herself this time. She's not only thinking of what would make her happy, but doing things as well. In this instance regardless of what Roy might say. It's great to see her growth show with a scene like that.

Dwight going off on his heritage like that was also fun. Hey if I'm not going to have German Dwight in "Silver Wings," feel free to use that for your own. You did a great job with it.

Going back to my flint and steel analogy from a couple chapters ago. Seems like Pam was getting closer igniting some better sparks here. The line with, "This feels right, Pam though. Nothing else in this stupid day goes right, but playing pranks with Jim always feels right." Hopefully she remembers that feeling and decides to investigate that a bit more.

Author's Response:

I figured you'd have a full panoply of directions for those EMTs ;)

Thanks for noticing the details of the non-BC cycles as well as the BC ones. To translate (via Google) what Dwight says in German here: "beet farmer," "maternal grandfather," "groundhog handler." And Pam is definitely getting closer on the Jim front...though also, as you'll see in the next chapter, further away. 

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