1 [Report This]Date: May 28, 2019 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 14: Trial, But Mostly Error
This story is an absolute delight to read . Keep those chapters coming!
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! I definitely will keep this rolling!
Date: May 25, 2019 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 14: Trial, But Mostly Error
I’m always down for a good movie montage. I’m actually pretty grateful not to see angry Roy over and over again. Poor Pam. At this point, I have no idea how you’re going to have her break up with Roy without it ending in disaster... I have no doubt that you have conjured up a way to make it all work out in the end though!
That whole Pokémon exchange was very cute, & put my childhood knowledge base to good use. Even though this cycle/s was about the Roy breakup, it was nice to have Jim injecting some levity into the situation (as Jim tends to do). I hope Pam has some success with everything she is setting out to achieve in the next cycle...
Author's Response: Yeah, I wanted to spare myself writing that again and again, so I'm glad you also enjoyed not having to read it ;). I'm glad to see someone else's spare trivia was also being put to use by the pokemon content. Pam will get there--but it might take a little while...thanks for the review!
1 [Report This]Date: May 25, 2019 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 14: Trial, But Mostly Error
Ugh! I want to kill Roy! He's absolutely in character btw, which makes it all more intense. Now Pam finds herself in a complicated problem... and I love it.
Thanks for updating!
Author's Response: I love writing stubborn stupid Roy, because it's always a fun thing (for us, not for her) for Pam to push against. Thanks for the review! I'm glad you're reading!
Date: May 25, 2019 11:57 am Title: Chapter 14: Trial, But Mostly Error
Yeah, that's kind of how I pictured Roy would react. Knee jerk anger. Something happens he doesn't like, get lashes out. See also Jim's face during the Office vs. Warehouse basketball game. Maybe she needs to enlist Darryl. Roy might not pay attention to her, but he does pay attention to his buddies. Still I admire Pam here. She's sticking to her guns and still trying to figure things out. Granted she doesn't really have much choice what with the whole repeating day thing, but still it's great to see the steel in her spine is staying strong.
The pokemon chat was also a lot of fun. Nice way to add in some humor. Also shows that Jim and Pam know each other really well. Well mostly since Jim did get her favorite pokemon wrong, but he was close to be sure.
Still doing a wonderful job with this. I always get excited when I see there's a new update.
Author's Response: Yeah. Roy doesn't do a lot of introspection. I'll be interested in seeing what you think of what I end up doing to help them apart (it may take a few chapters to show you, but I have an idea in mind). Thanks for the feedback!