Date: October 08, 2020 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 17: Montage
These pranks are VERY ingenious.
Author's Response: Danke! I always have a lot of fun trying to figure out pranks, so that's good to hear.
1 [Report This]Date: June 06, 2019 04:55 am Title: Chapter 17: Montage
I missed the same beginning, but just a bit: it's clear by now that Pam might be living the same day, but she is surely not the same person. I can hardly wait to see how it ends!
Author's Response: I think we all know how it ends ;) But of course, the devil is in the details. I hope you keep enjoying!
Date: June 04, 2019 12:55 am Title: Chapter 17: Montage
Now I have to go back and re-read the start of every chapter because I definitely did not notice them starting with the same thing - a testament to my exceptional observational skills I am sure... I loved the repurposing of other pranks to fit with this story. A brilliant use for identity theft/future faxes. It’s nice to see Pam determined again & working towards her end goal, no matter how many repetitions it takes. Bring on the permanent dumping of Roy!
Author's Response: I wondered if people would notice, because if I were the reader I totally wouldn't, but since I copy-paste the first line of the fic every time I as the writer am very aware of it...thanks so much for the feedback, and I hope you like chapter 18!
Date: June 03, 2019 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 17: Montage
It was the first thing I noticed actually. That this didn't start with the same words. Lots of awesome stuff here. The identity theft, faxes from Future Dwight, Jim and Pam (especially Pam) in full pranking form. I'm so glad that she's having fun with everything now.
The flame is getting bigger here. She's got some small sticks burning and it looks to be building up nicely. Can't wait to see what happens when she really adds fuel to the fire.
Author's Response: Nice catch, then. Be on the lookout in the last 2 chapters. Thanks so much for the feedback!
1 [Report This]Date: June 03, 2019 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 17: Montage
I don’t want this story to end!! This is so much fun
Author's Response: Well, if it helps, the next chapter is the longest single chapter I've ever posted! So it may end, but there's a lot of content on the way! Thanks for reading.