Date: October 09, 2020 09:29 am Title: Chapter 19: En Fin
Again, this is just really good work - it shows a lot of insight into Season 2 Pam and lets her play out her story in a really entertaining way.
Honestly, there should be more time loop fanfic in general, but you proved that Pam could really benefit from one.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really proud of this fic, so I'm glad you got the same things out of it that I wanted to put into it. Thanks for the review waterfall, too! It's always exciting to read along with someone.
1 [Report This]Date: May 21, 2020 03:08 am Title: Chapter 19: En Fin
I loved the groundhog idea! Binged read this in like 2 hours, so that's when you know its an amazing fic!
Author's Response: Thank you! I am so glad when people read fics that I wrote in the past, because it's a reminder that everything doesn't just disappear into oblivion. Thanks so much :)
1 [Report This]Date: June 08, 2019 11:29 am Title: Chapter 19: En Fin
(got mad a part of my review was missing and deleted? Yes)
See, I was right to be anxious about how it ended! I love domestic scenes and Jim making breakfast is just too sweet.
Author's Response:
Thank you for that. I hope it was a non-anxiety-inducing domestic scene ;)
Date: June 07, 2019 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 19: En Fin
I think it goes without saying that I’ve enjoyed reading this story, but I’m going to say it anyway - it has been a delight! I’m sad to see it come to an end, but so, so glad there’s finally a resolution for our poor groundhog-ing Pam.
I loved the use of Dwight in this chapter! Jim quietly setting him up was such a clever (& Jim-like) way for him to intervene. I have to admit, I’m a little sad we don’t get to see them resolve things on the cruise - however, if I may suggest a Lake Wallenpaupack Booze Cruise wedding sequel to this tale?! Please and thank you. After all, we know Pam & Jim are open to maritime nuptials... Just planting a seed 😉
I can’t wait to go back & read this in one go. Thanks so much for writing & sharing!
Author's Response: Well, I'm equally delighted that you've been reading along! I'll consider the epilogue/sequel you've requested; I don't typically revisit my stories but this one and Office Space have both generated those kinds of requests so I might do it if no new story arc comes to mind or I'm feeling frisky. Thank you so much for your feedback along the way!
1 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2019 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 19: En Fin
Great way to end things. Her joy in it being tomorrow was stunning to witness. She's completely free of the past and is ready, willing and able to dive into the future. That fire of hers shows no sign of dying down and it's great to see.
Your JAM banter remains on point. Lots of fun watching them bounce off each other. I loved how she still won't back down from Roy and that Jim goes for the subtle approach in helping her out. Masterfully done there.
This has been a treat from start to finish. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Fortes Fortuna Adiuvat
Author's Response: Merci beacoup! I'm really glad you enjoyed this chapter. I'd known for a while I wanted a "this is what happens after the cycle breaks" chapter, and I'm delighted it seems to have worked.
Date: June 07, 2019 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 19: En Fin
Such a perfect ending!! (I loved loved Dwight's intervention). Thanks so much for this story :)
Author's Response: Oh, I'm so glad you liked the ending! I was worried it too would feel rushed (ironically, while I didn't feel like I rushed the previous chapter end, I did feel like I might have done so with this one). Thanks as ever for reading and reviewing!