1 [Report This]Date: August 15, 2020 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love this idea! And I love Marla. I can see how this all plays out with the building of fancy new Beesly.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes I enjoyed creating and writing Marla and getting to flesh out Pam’s character development through her art.
1 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2019 08:32 am Title: Chapter 1
Love the OC. Liking seeing what Pam might be getting out of art as opposed to just having it be a character trait to check off a box. Well done.
1 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2019 06:12 am Title: Chapter 1
Nice start. I like that Pam has Marla here. It's always nice to see an encouraging voice for Pam, especially during the dark days of S3. A story getting deeper into Pam's developing artistic talents is also a lot of fun as well.
1 [Report This]Date: July 15, 2019 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really like this idea of seeing Pam through someone else's eyes. And right off the bat, I really love Marla!
What a rough night for Pam... I appreciate the little details like her watching the door for 'someone', and waiting until everyone else was gone to confess that Gil thought her work was motel art.
“Because they don’t change, I guess. Like, they stay in one place.” Oh. This is my favorite line in the chapter - it just says so much about Pam's current situation.
And now here I am, cheering for Pam to prove Gil and everyone else wrong.