1 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2019 08:42 am Title: Chapter 2
Very nice! I loved you including a pic, but I was hooked from the moment you made clear what she'd be painting this chapter. So great!
1 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2019 08:42 am Title: Chapter 2
Very nice! I loved you including a pic, but I was hooked from the moment you made clear what she'd be painting this chapter. So great!
1 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2019 06:21 am Title: Chapter 2
Great fun to include the drawing! It really added a lot to be able to see a representation of "Pam's" ;) work there. Lot of growth for Pam here. I'm glad she took the critiques seriously. It can be hard to hear seemingly negative comments, but if you don't know what's wrong, how can you fix it? Great way to show more of Pam's courage with that painting.
I also really enjoyed the process behind the piece. I've never done artwork like that, drawing and painting and such. Now that I realize it it seems silly that one would just pick up a pencil and draw, just like a write usually doesn't sit down and start to type. The reference pics being akin to the research that goes into a story. At least for me that is. So thanks for that insight to that world of art.
1 [Report This]Date: July 15, 2019 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 2
Pam waiting until Friday to work on a project due Monday says a lot to my procrastinating heart and it's another personality trait that you've given her in this story that I love.
NLM! I love, love, love how this drawing came to be in pieces -- starting with her drawing Jim in the office and then adding herself after. It's just so lovely, and I like that you incorporated an interpretation of the end product so we can see it.
I was nervous for Pam's classmates critiques.. is that weird? So you can imagine my relief as the scene went on and these fictional characters didn't rip her to shreds... not that I thought they would, but, well... like I said, I had concerns!
And for her to get her final grade right after the coal walk? Ugh, this is so good. You've got me grinning like a fool over here; I'm so happy for Pam right now.