1 [Report This]Date: June 03, 2021 06:48 pm Title: Falling Together
Awwww. And here we see Jim and Pam turning this place with special memories for each of them separately into a special memory for both of them together. Well tied together.
I thought this was a good explanation for why they ended up having the cameras along - they earned their way onto the guest list.
And the vows were well done I thought! True to their experience.
Author's Response: This chapter was just plain good fun to write. They're starting their lives as a married couple, so it makes sense to me they'd combine other aspects of their lives. Glad you liked the vows and my reason as to why they allowed the camera with them on the boat.. Those were fun to think up too.
1 [Report This]Date: October 08, 2019 05:47 am Title: Falling Together
You used the threesome verse! Sorry, my wife's a pastor, there are a lot of jokes at seminary about the threefold cord (which is how the NRSV translates it). It's a lovely passage, but I'm very glad you had your captain gloss what he thinks the passage means.
I was not in any way expecting the time jump so nice work. I think you did a great job inside canon. Looking forward to the rest.
Author's Response: I've never heard that verse referred to like that, but I can easily see why. Like I said it was the passage my wife and I had read at our wedding so it immediately jumped to mind for me. It was fun to look into the very brief shots from the show and flesh out "their" ceremony as opposed to what happened at the church. Glad you liked it.
Date: September 25, 2019 08:09 pm Title: Falling Together
Bravo! So much sweet JAM. I love their vows. He knew from the start she was the one. He snuck up on her. Just perfect!
Author's Response: Thank you. I was a lot of fun to bring this one together and I'm glad you enjoyed it so much.
1 [Report This]Date: September 25, 2019 07:23 am Title: Falling Together
My heart! Having only recently gotten married & having my own experiences so fresh this chapter left me feeling all the emotions. It was so beautiful. I loved how you used scenes from canon fleshed out with far more detail. It filled the gaps in a lovely way that felt true to the story. I’m looking forward to seeing how you fit the falls into the future chapter that’s to come.
Author's Response: It was fun to bring some more life to the scenes we all know and love. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter so much. Thanks as always for your review.