Reviews For The Falls
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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: June 03, 2021 07:12 pm Title: Falling Forever

"Great big hedgehog-faced beast!" is definitely a line I'm going to be borrowing.

I love the idea of 10-year-anniversary Jim and Pam still being able to act like kids together before moving on to more adult activities. And the light show at the Falls sounds amazing.

The new teapot is a fun throwback and a good way of giving us a glimpse at what's important in their lives now. The gifts from the kids were very imaginative - as always I like the idea you've created of a more Jim-like Cece and a more-Pam like Phil - and the new card feels accurate to an older, more reflective Jim.

Is this meant to be consistent with the Jamie-and-Morgan Verse? If so, it's near-miss #12.

Author's Response: Hedgehog-faced beast is a line my wife uses on me if I go to long without shaving. It's so much fun I had to put it in there. Part of the fun of Jim and Pam is that they have so much fun together. I only see that staying the same as their marriage continues. Google the pics of the Niagara Falls light show sometime, it's really pretty and 100% something I think would spark Pam's creative moments. Glad you liked the new bonus gifts especially with things from their kids. 

Sadly no this story is not in the Jamie and Morgan universe as of writing this the count still stands at 11. 

Glad you liked this one and thanks for the reviews.

Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 08, 2019 05:52 am Title: Falling Forever

Yeah, pretty sure I don't mind :). This was a lovely story and I really enjoyed it. You have a real touch for embedding adorable stories within canon in a way that makes me think a lot about what could be happening around the edges, and this is no exception. Wonderful work as ever.

Author's Response: Didn't think you would mind, but I wanted to give credit where credit is due. Thanks as always for the words of encouragement. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much.

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 08, 2019 04:45 am Title: Falling Forever

This was so, so sweet. I love how you tied in the yoghurt lid medal and David Wallace’s ten year question. Very fitting to think back over on this anniversary.
This is everything I would want from them at this stage of their lives... It was the absolute sweetest. I can’t think of a better way to describe it. Thanks for taking us on this lovely anniversary journey. The link with the falls tying it all together was so well executed. Did I mention that it was very sweet?

Author's Response: I figured having the yogurt lid in the teapot would be a nice call back. Glad it worked out well. I've been to Niagara Falls several times in my life so it helps since I can easily picture everything. Thanks for following along with this story. Your words of encouragement are always welcome.

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