Date: October 05, 2019 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 7: Break Room
I’m with Kelly, she should date him! The touching, the delightful awkwardness. How can two people have so much damn chemistry?! It’s jumping off the page...
Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate hearing this.
1 [Report This]Date: October 03, 2019 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 7: Break Room
Great way to add in the bit with the Marvel comics. That Pam is primarily interested in the artwork before the story is a wonderful way to spin it.
Pam's confusion about Jim along with all the unbidden thoughts about him in more than a friend kind of way are endearing. It's kind of cute to seem them stumbling over themselves like this. As a fan of your many stories (and stalker of reviews and the responses to the same) I'm sure I know where this will eventually wind up. but the process of getting there is often more than half the fun. True to form you're not disappointing with this one either.
Author's Response: Thanks, warrior! That bit is of course a direct response to your comment, but I think it really helps flesh Pam out. I do think you know where this will end up (do I ever write pure angst?) but hopefully the journey will be worth it even if we know the destination.