Date: October 09, 2019 12:03 am Title: Chapter 10: A Stairwell
That description of Pam and her “calmness”/general apathy was wow. It feels so, so much like her character early on. A really wonderful way to explain her mindset. I like that Jim mixes it up a little for her - even if Pam finds it somewhat off putting.
Jim winning over everyone in the office was just generally adorable. The introduction of the air five was great inclusion/link to canon.
Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate the careful way you're reading the emotional beats of the story.
1 [Report This]Date: October 08, 2019 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 10: A Stairwell
Love the Marvel reference - in my head-canon Jim is a big DC fan, particularly of Superman.
Author's Response: Thanks! I agree; I think Jim is a Superman guy rather than a Batman guy, but probably DC. I could also see him as a fan of someone weird, like the Martian Manhunter or Blue Beetle.
Date: October 08, 2019 11:22 am Title: Chapter 10: A Stairwell
More with Marvel! Yay! I'm really enjoying Nerd!Pam so thanks for including that. Lots of good introspection on her part here. I do like that she's already starting to think about what she wants and doesn't want out of life. When they're at their best, Jim and Pam are great together and you bring that out well.
Also a lot of fun to see the creating of their Air-Fives.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm enjoying writing their dynamic, and dropping in Nerd!Pam is a lot of fun along the way. Thanks for the idea!