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Reviewer: BecauseOfYou Signed [Report This]
Date: October 22, 2019 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 13: Pizza

I fully expect the backsliding but this side of Pam is always a great joy to read, especially so early on.

Author's Response: Thank you! We will have more of it, I assure you.

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2019 02:22 am Title: Chapter 13: Pizza

Ugh. This is just another glimpse that confirms that Roy is the absolute worst. The. Worst. I’m hoping that it takes Pam far less time than canon to come to her senses...

Author's Response:

I think you might be right...

 

Thanks for the review! 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 20, 2019 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 13: Pizza

Hell yeah Pam! Tell that big caveman brute what for! I know this is well before Fancy New Beesly and all, but clearly she has that spunk within her. After all we did see Pam and Roy fight on camera in canon the night of the Dundies so it's not like this is out of character or anything.

Good on ya Pam for not letting Roy get away this kind of brutish behavior. I get that there may be some backsliding, but still good to see her stand up for herself like this. Keep up with those instincts.

Wonderful writing as always.

Author's Response: Thank you! We will generally see a more self-assertive Pam here because one of the changes I'm positing is that her relationship with Roy declines because of the weirder but more connective way she and Jim meet. 

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