Date: October 23, 2019 05:26 am Title: Chapter 14: The Bar, Redux
I bet Pam’s going to do a double take when she sees Roy and Jim in the same bar. Hopefully this will help her contrast drunk, annoying Roy with charming Jim. Hope this pushes Pam and Roy’s breakup forward
Author's Response: I think it will! Thanks for the review (and the idea).
Date: October 22, 2019 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 14: The Bar, Redux
Way to leave it on a cliffhanger (of sorts). I hope Jim drinking at Poor Richards doesn’t diminish his standing in Pam’s eyes. I almost feel like she’d view him as not all that dissimilar from Roy if it were a regular occurrence... Not that I get that vibe at all, it just makes me think about it... Looking forward to another delightful Pam & Jim interaction that feels them both a little flustered & confused (in all the best ways)...
Author's Response: I promise to unhang the cliff. And thanks for the thought about her POV, I used it (as you'll see).
Date: October 22, 2019 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 14: The Bar, Redux
Feels like kind of a filler chapter here. Yes Jim's getting better at reading Pam so that's good to see. Still it's nice to see how Jim got set up in the house with Mark. A curious little tidbit there about Jim's folks and Larissa. Looks like a bit of Halpert family drama. Still an enjoyable story. Looking forward to seeing how thing go over with Pam showing up there at the end.
Author's Response: It is filler! But necessary filler I think. Thank you for reading, as always.