Date: November 01, 2019 03:51 am Title: Chapter 15: A Good Parking Lot
Congrats on your new little one! That definitely takes precedence over quick updating!
I loved how you incorporated Pam’s point of view on Jim’s drinking. It served a very strong purpose in the comparison with Roy. I was also very glad to see the chapter end with Pam frustrated & taking a step away from Roy. Although, I suspect it’s a little two steps forward, one step back for the time being...
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, I'll probably update a bit slower with the kid...but we shall still see how Pam works out with the steps forwards and back.
Date: October 31, 2019 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 15: A Good Parking Lot
Congrats on the kiddo! That's wonderful! Best of luck to you, sleep when you can as often as you can.
Interesting to see Pam's initial reaction to seeing Jim in the bar. I get it. She's had to pull Roy out of there so often that's right to where her mind goes. I love that the more she looks, the more Jim surprises her in a good way. I also like that she's starting to do more to separate herself from Roy. It's adding more and more to the pattern that she needs to get out of that relationship. Wonderful to see an update.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm working on it! I do think Pam has certain patterns for men so thus certain reactions she'll have to recognize and possibly fix...
Date: October 31, 2019 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 15: A Good Parking Lot
Congratulations on the baby, and on a great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks on both!