Date: November 20, 2019 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 18: Pam's Morning
The plot thickens! Did Jim punch Roy? Was it because Roy said insulting things about Pam, or maybe Roy just tried to deck Jim out of jealousy but was too slow? Or maybe it was Michael. Can’t wait to read the next chapter
Author's Response: Good guesses all! Thank you.
Date: November 20, 2019 01:18 am Title: Chapter 18: Pam's Morning
Way to get in Roy’s head! I could definitely see a fight playing out this way. Boy oh boy, would Roy arc up and see himself as in the right if - in his mind - Pam was completely to blame for an argument. The idea that Roy didn’t like Pam hanging out with his friends also feels like a perfect fit for his character. I would never have thought of it, but does it make sense!
Way to leave it on a cliffhanger. I’ll be hanging out for that update!
Author's Response: Thank you! It's not necessarily a good thing to get into my version of Roy's head, but I'm glad that read well for you!
Date: November 19, 2019 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 18: Pam's Morning
I think this may have been the fastest I've seen you update a story in a good lone time. Not complaining in the slightest mind you. Really glad to see this one going.
Lots of introspection here, kind of. Part of me would have liked to have had the actual dialoge of Pam and Roy's fight, but still we got the jist of what was going on. Pam was trying to mend fences, Roy's a jerk, and hopefully this all spells the end of the Roy/Pam relationship in this universe.
I've got a feeling Angela didn't mean Roy when she said Pam's boyfriend was bleeding there at the end. Great job as always getting into the feelings of your characters.
Author's Response: Yeah, I've kind of fallen off the quick update wagon, I'll try to get back on (Thanksgiving permitting). Thanks for the comments! We're nearing the end, though it may take several actual updates to get all the emotional beats in there.