Date: December 02, 2019 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 21: The Same, Continued
Brief but vital is definitely an apt description. I love how well Pam has Jim picked. I hope Jim can see the significance of it. I bet if Pam thinks on it, she doesn’t have Roy as easily figured out - yes, his behavior is somewhat predictable, but does she really understand the creature that is Roy & the sometimes terrible decisions he makes?
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: I think Jim will have a lot to think about after these two chapters. I promise I'll let him do it (and her too). Thanks!
Date: December 02, 2019 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 21: The Same, Continued
Short yes, but full of impact. Clearly Jim and Pam have a strong connection here. That Pam can list off all of Jim's tells like this is a great way to show that. That Jim is flummoxed until he has no other choice but just spit it out is also a good choice. He's trying to be the nice guy but at the same time he can't deny what's he's feeling towards Pam.
Seems like Pam is off to have her own confrontation. Lots of heated emotions right now. Looking forward to more as always.
Author's Response: Yes, I think short but dense is the way this will probably go from here on in. Thank you for the review!