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Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11, 2019 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 24: Corolla

Definitely adorable. It’s nice to see Pam coming to a bit of realization that there is an attraction there. Also great to see her defaulting to humor & it working very well to defuse whatever awkwardness/difference to Roy that may exist. Bring on the apartment hunting!

Author's Response: Thank you! Apartment hunting will commence shortly!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11, 2019 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 24: Corolla

"We, Miss Pamela=what's your last name"
"Morgan"

Whoops. I'm sure it's just an innocent typo. (wordo? is that a thing since the incorrect word IS spelled correctly, but it's the wrong word for what you meant)

I also like it that Jim's using this as an opportunity to get to know her more. Find out what she likes to do outside of work.

Yes, they are all sorts of adorable here. Pam's still kind of overthinking things, but her thinking is starting to head in the right direction at least. Nicely done.

What's also adorable is the continuation of their Marvel vs. DC debate. That's just so much fun. I can easily see in this world that once they finally get together they try and rope their kids into things, buying Marvel or DC clothes to send into the other one telling them to say something like "Look what Mommy got me!"

Author's Response: Oh good catch! I've edited that. Thanks for the support on both the general adorableness and the comics stuff. I always appreciate your careful eye!

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