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Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: December 25, 2019 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 29: Parking Lot

Ah, I love that this Jim gets that Pam is asking him out in her own quiet way. And that they both then refer to it as a date (leaving no place for miscommunication). Wonderful. Really looking forward to seeing how you wrap this one up.
Merry Christmas! All the best to you & yours.

Author's Response: Thank you! A quick wrapup, but hopefully one you enjoy! Happy New Year!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 25, 2019 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 29: Parking Lot

Lots of fun there at the end. The awkwardness that seemed to pervade the first part of this chapter is more than made up for with the realization that he's taking her out on their first date. And it's to Cuginos. Wonderful way to tie into canon yet still remain in keeping with this AU. Very nicely done. Looking forward to seeing how this all wraps up. Hopefully with at least one more Marvel vs. DC debate between the two of them cause those were such fun throughout this tale.

Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate all your thoughts and feedback along the way!

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