1 [Report This]Date: September 27, 2023 06:06 pm Title: Day 10
This may be my favorite chapter (have to see how the other shape out of course) but… the sweetness of Dwight & Pam friendship is always my favorite and I adore the blending of him being supportive to her while Jim is away. Then the bonus gift of Jim bringing Cece… absolutely priceless.
Author's Response: The Dwight/Pam relationship is really a great one. His soft spot for her. Her ability to see the good in him. It's all wonderful. Glad I could bring that out. Jim showing up at work is just the icing on the cake.
Date: July 11, 2021 02:31 pm Title: Day 10
Sigh. Poor Pam just doesn't really have the sales gene, does she? Glad she's at least getting some of the benefits of being desk-neighbors with Dwight. I would love to read a similar post-sales call analysis from him.
I'm glad to see Jim able to tell, subconsciously, that Pam could use some family time here...
Author's Response: Pam is many things, but a top level saleswoman sadly is not really one of them. Still it was fun to bring out some of the Pam/Dwight friendship here.
1 [Report This]Date: March 22, 2020 10:04 pm Title: Day 10
...does that sinus tapping thing work? Am I really about to take some advice from Dwight?
That aside, I just really love seeing slices of life for my favorite couple. Even when it’s split up, like just seeing Jim’s day through the status updates and seeing more of Pam as she navigates unfamiliar terrain. Her self evaluation made me proud of her! I might steal that for use in my own life. And you wrote Dwight really well! I always love when he says something and it takes them a minute before they go “oh, that’s actually pretty helpful!” Great work as always. Now I’m off to read more of another story written by you!
Author's Response:
Medically speaking, I honestly have no idea if sinus tapping like that works. However I feel it's got that feeling of folksy wisdom along with a hint of alternative medicine that would appeal to Dwight. And hey if it works for you, feel free. Same goes for the self evaluation. Glad you liked how I wrote Dwight too. It's also fun to show him as more than just a punching bag for Jim and Pam's pranks. He does care about people in his own Dwight-ish way.
Glad you liked the rest of the chapter. It's fun to write Pam as still learning and growing. Thanks for the review. Hope you enjoy whatever other story you're off too. I completed and created several during your sabatical.
Date: March 19, 2020 11:25 pm Title: Day 10
Dwight was the shining star of this chapter is something I don’t say often, but the Dwight content on offer here was wonderful! I can’t say I particularly enjoy reading about mucus, but when Dwight puts it like that, it’s too funny not to appreciate.
Lovely to see Jim stop in at work, I could feel Pam’s pleased surprise - definitely a nice way to go into the rest of her work day.
Author's Response: It was fun adding in a good Dwight scene. As much fun as it is to prank him, he and Pam also have a fun non-pranking friendship that's fun to explore. Thanks as always for your review.
1 [Report This]Date: March 19, 2020 12:37 pm Title: Day 10
Why is it that I love the Pam and Dwight friendship so much? You wrote it well here, just enough annoyance, some truth and a sprinkle of kindness and understanding. And I think I'm going to take Dwight's advice as well! (not about the sinus headache!)
Author's Response: Thank you. That was exactly the tone I was going for so I'm glad it came across.