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Reviewer: AmeliaHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: October 04, 2023 07:03 am Title: Day 13

I absolutely love the patter you write. It flows so well, I felt like a fly on the wall of a wonderful married couple who genuinely works together in partnership.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. When Jim and Pam are at their best, they're really a great couple. There's some stuff from my own marriage woven in here too so that's fun to bring in as well.

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2021 02:35 pm Title: Day 13

Ugh. What an unbelievable mess parental leave is in this country.

Author's Response: AMEN!! We need better things in this country.

Reviewer: HonestAndCourageous Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2020 07:01 pm Title: Day 13

Jim always thinks of something!
A nice, sweet, peaceful end to this one. I enjoyed the read.
Thanks for writing!

Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. Yeah nothing to exciting for this chapter. Not everything in life is big and dramatic so makes sense to follow that theme here.

Reviewer: oncelet Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2020 03:42 pm Title: Day 13

This was a sunny, warm story that was a joy to read. Looking forward to the epilogue!!!

Author's Response: Thank you. It's been a lot of fun to write so I'm glad you've enjoyed it so much.

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2020 04:49 pm Title: Day 13

I don’t know, I still think there’s a lot of fluffiness that comes from the simple moments here. I feel like Jim is going to miss his time at home when he returns to work.
Please tell me that daycare experience hasn’t been drawn from RL, because that is terrible!

Author's Response: Thanks Jenna. Yes Jim will miss his time with Cece. But that's a bit of life. The sudden postponing of a daycare slot is not based on real life, thank god. That was just a device I used to help line up my story with canon. Glad you liked this chapter.

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