Reviews For Her pale days
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Reviewer: late2theprty Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 24, 2020 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow. I was not expecting that. Nice AU that just went into the deep end. Roy can be so misunderstood depending on how you look at it. This story is just a tragic option that shows how deep Pam is willing to go to suppprt him. Great job.

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 23, 2020 03:12 am Title: Chapter 1

This was not at all what I was expecting! Definitely a supernatural twist and probably the most hideous version of Roy to ever exist.
I loved all the little moments included in this - how quickly Jim falls for Pam, their first “date”, pranking Dwight. The inclusion of that first Christmas was probably my favorite part. I really loved the idea of Jim not even really trying and finding the perfect gift for Angela. There were so many nice little touches like that throughout.
A fun read!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review!

The weirdest thing, I don't even loathe Roy that much. But the idea came, and I couldn't fight it, so... sorry, Roy. 

I'm glad you like these moments :) They were very fun to write. I definitely want to write more! 

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2020 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow, that was a trip. Walked in thinking it was going to be a story about cancer, instead we got Jim the vampire slayer. Didn't see that one coming!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Writing about supernatural stuff feels more comfortable than about cancer, so... Hope you weren't disappointed :) 

Reviewer: beth9501 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2020 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 1

I definitely wasn't expecting the turn of this story. I agree with the others that you did a great job setting this up!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  Glad you appreciate it :)

Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2020 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 1

Well that was much creepier than I expected but in a very good way. I liked what you did with it, and that you didn't spend too long on backstory (always a danger with this kind of story). Good work!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much :) 

I thought the backstory wasn't that interesting,  so I didn't focus on it too much. Glad it worked out well. 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2020 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

It was definitely different that's for sure. I really wasn't expecting the whole supernatural element at all. Still you did a great job setting up the emotional content of everything prior to Pam's stint in the hospital. Nice to see a Jim-saves-the-day story. Even with that, I think it was appropriate to see that Jim is also carrying those images with him. Stuff like that does tend to stick with a person.

Nice to see them together afterwards and that they're there to fend off any further demons.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! I appreciate it very much. 

The whole story was my indulgence to 'Jim in shining armor' idea, I guess. It might be weird, but I just couldn't help. 

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