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Reviewer: homemadejam Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2020 09:45 am Title: Chapter 1: Setup

Haha nice ;)

Another fantastic chapter, I love the reminders from Casino Night, how Jim reacts to Pam’s dress and Pam to his jumper. It’s all so powerful for them, I love it

Author's Response: Thank you! I think if they're as important as they are for us, they'd have to be more for them right?

Reviewer: homemadejam Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2020 10:39 am Title: Chapter 1: Setup

“Well, I don’t need a better Jim. I’m happy with the one I have.” Comfect! You make my JAM heart ache

Very excited to see the AU season 3!

Author's Response: Aw, thanks! That's very good to hear!

Reviewer: Guten Schriftsteller Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 28, 2020 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 1: Setup

How long will you continue this story? And if te answer isn't forever damn wish it would. Anyways fabulous story and I wait every night for your updates.

Author's Response: The answer is as long as I enjoy writing it (or as long as I have plot ideas--I outline what I'm planning in the latest chapter endnotes). Thank you for the kind words!

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2020 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 1: Setup

I feel like Ryan would have been good at Jan's job if he didn't get caught up in the drugs. It'll be interesting to see you spin him into the ARM job.

I can already see the easy sell to Ryan now: There is no clingy Kelly in Stamford, and mo money.

Looking forward to more!

Edit: big thumbs little buttons strikes again.

Author's Response: I think you're right. But then again, drugs are a danger to him at Stamford too...thank you for the review!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 10, 2020 03:39 am Title: Chapter 1: Setup

Thus far looks like another classic in the making. As always your gift for introspection shines. I can totally see Jim trying his best to think of Australia on the trip out there and failing as you have him here.

Pam's thoughts are also really interesting. Mulling over what her name means to her. Who has called her what over they years. What she's called herself. All wrapped around all the post Casino Night emotions. Great job as usual.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm enjoying thinking about this particular moment, which has been gone over so often in the fanfic world, and I hope I can keep up the mix of introspection and emotion.

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2020 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 1: Setup

This is a wonderful set up! So much emotional turmoil for the both of them. I can’t wait to see how this pans out.

Author's Response: Thank you! It's an age-old premise but I'm hoping to give it my own twists.

Reviewer: SprinklesTheCat Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2020 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 1: Setup

I'm intrigued to see where this goes. Great start. I like Jim's reflection on when he might have been able to pull the plug.

Author's Response: Thank you! This will probably be a pretty introspective fic, so I'm glad you're enjoying the reflection.

Reviewer: BigTuna Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2020 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 1: Setup

In reading this I am struck with just how much I have missed MTT and you guys, and how talented everyone is. In 733 words you have set up a story and established their frames of mind and I already can't wait to see where it goes. I know it will be wonderful. I am so looking forward to what comes next!

Author's Response: I've missed you too! I'm so glad you're back, and I hope you keep reading this just like I'm enjoying reading yours!

Reviewer: Merria Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2020 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 1: Setup

Great premise! Hope you keep at it

Author's Response: Thank you! I'll definitely finish it (that's my promise for all fics) but we'll see if the pace keeps up--that said, ch. 2 is up now.

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