1 [Report This]Date: March 11, 2020 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 3: Movies
I like these bits of humor that you sprinkle into this angsty piece "classics hour on Qantas " "CHEAPOAIR" and your nods to Mozilla and Firefox... keeps it from getting too heavy.
But this line "He smiled a pained apology and tried his best to suffer in silence. Which, he reflected, was what he was best at."
Poor Jim!
Looking forward to the updates!
Thanks for writing!
Author's Response: Thank you! I think this is an angsty moment, but that means we have a responsibility to keep it a little more upbeat.
Date: March 11, 2020 09:47 am Title: Chapter 3: Movies
If I could leave a gif comment it’d be one of me bouncing around in anticipation for this story to continue! Also I like that Jim watched Legally Blonde and enjoyed it and had to eat some crow, even if only to himself.
Author's Response: Thank you! I like the movie, so of course I have to make Jim like it.
Date: March 10, 2020 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 3: Movies
Yes, Pam, book those flights!
That line about Jim suffering in silence? Just perfect!
Fast updates are great, but if it slows down, we’ll still be here 😊
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: March 10, 2020 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 3: Movies
Aww Jim. Going through some self-depreciation there buddy. I mean I get it. This is one of the lowest points for him as a character so it makes sense. Nice touch with the shower and perm reference.
Last chapter I said both Pam and Jim are moving but without a destination. There at the end thought there's a glimmer of a destination for Pam. Now granted from your story description, this move is expected. However the process behind the move is fun to read.
Author's Response: Yeah. I think he's pretty low. I think he's going to stay low for a little while too, but hopefully some other motion will help him up...