Date: March 12, 2020 01:20 am Title: Chapter 4: A Brief Update
That last Jim line: “riding along, ticket-free, in his head,” was just brilliant.
Short, but very effective update.
I can’t wait for Pam to get to him...
Author's Response: I appreciate it! I'm afraid she also has to fly across an ocean, so it may be a few updates...
1 [Report This]Date: March 11, 2020 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 4: A Brief Update
Yes short, but nice to see. Jim's still just going through the motions. Pam though is building up momentum.
I also love you're giving us both of their perspectives in each chapter this time around. The one POV per character from your previous stories worked well too, but it's nice to see this change as well.
Author's Response: Yeah, Pam has a ways to go to get to Jim, both metaphorically and literally, so that dynamic may persist. Thanks for the feedback on the POVs--it's a thing I wanted to try, glad it's working.