Date: March 23, 2020 04:13 am Title: Chapter 15: Museums Galore
I like to really test the old memory & not google map where you’re sending them - I know Sydney’s big landmarks aren’t all that spread out... Hyde Park I can actually picture.
I’m really enjoying your virtual tour of Sydney, I think you’re doing such a lovely job of describing the sights. Would recommend the bridge climb.
You’re moving through the landmarks, which leaves me very, very curious as to where they will eventually meet at. Nice to get a glimpse into where they’re both at in terms of thinking (or not) about one another. Looking forward to the next update!
Author's Response: That's fair! You actually have some knowledge that I don't, so the need to Google might be less. I'm glad you think I'm doing it justice (and there might be a bridge climb in this fic's future--sadly probably not in mine). Thanks!
Date: March 22, 2020 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 15: Museums Galore
Wonderful work as always. It is a testament to your talent that these chapters are all less than a thousand words but still have a lot of emotional depth and character development that might take other writers (cough cough me cough cough) like 2.5k words to do, haha! Also it was way fun to explore Sydney on Google Maps! It was already on my bucket list but now you’ve given me lots of places to go when I finally get the chance to visit!
Author's Response:
Thank you! This next one is our longest, but it's still only 1500 or so. Thank you for the compliment! I usually feel like I am cheating everyone by not having the longer chapters everyone else writes, but I'm literally incapable of writing more than about 2k words in a single mental arc, so I don't. Delighted to know it still works for you emotionally.
I also want to visit these places so badly. Gotta admit, the travelogue element is kind of wish fulfillment here, especially mid-pandemic.
Date: March 22, 2020 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 15: Museums Galore
I'm so happy I Google mapped this! I've been really enjoying all your updates and seeing their thought processes aligning so well. I'm looking forward to the next update!
Author's Response: So am I! Thank you for reading and for following along on the map too!
Date: March 22, 2020 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 15: Museums Galore
So Jim's out and about. Nice that he's having a good time. It seems his thoughts are calming down a bit. *Taps chin* Interesting. *Goes to Google where Jim is right now* Very interesting.
Pam going to a tall place because Jim is tall was a hoot. *Googles Pam's starting and ending points in this chapter* VEEERY interesting.
*Notices- (Remember that story? I remember that story. Good story, moving on) Notices another landmark currently north and east of the current location of our heroes*
Would Comfect do that? That be the place where they finally meet up? Quite probably, which is leaving me grinning from ear to ear hoping my theory is right. Time will tell.
Still lots of fun with this story. Keep it up.
Author's Response: Would I do that? Would I? Did I plan this entire fic around that? You'll just have to keep reading. Thanks!