Date: September 02, 2022 08:58 am Title: You start my day before the dawn
Last time I was on Lys? hora, the witchea must've had some sort of gathering. I don't remember the weather ever being this bad for such a long time except for some recent floods... Gret chapter as always!
Date: October 29, 2020 03:37 pm Title: You start my day before the dawn
This was a very cute first non-date, and I really like how you mixed their playfulness and melancholy and sweetness together in this chapter. The runner about Pam as a witch was hilarious, and very in character.
And "He'd never been into poetry until now" is a great line.
Author's Response: Thank you! I just really like witchy Pam (but you knew it already!).
Date: June 12, 2020 03:52 am Title: You start my day before the dawn
Aww. Beautiful. I do like that this feels like Jim and Pam in character despite the Ukrainified setting.
Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate it, I try to keep them in character.
Date: June 11, 2020 11:09 pm Title: You start my day before the dawn
“Well, the client could wait.” Oh Jim. Pam always comes first for him. It’s so incredibly sweet. I feel like this has kind of the same energy as “not a bad day”.
“'All right,' Jim replied and bit his tongue to prevent 'it's a date' from escaping.” Ouch. That’s a bit of a punch to the chest. But at the same time, it’s kind of nice that Jim is giving her the time to heal before jumping into anything.
“She was twenty minutes earlier than he'd expected.” This makes me so very happy. I love the idea that Pam has had a similar morning to Jim and her anticipation has her arriving early too.
Jim’s dream is so very lovely. It breaks my heart a little that it was only a dream. His frustration at wasting his time with her sleeping is so palpable.
I love the little snippets of Ukrainian folklore/culture throughout this story. You make me long for international travel again...
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, Jenna! I'm in love with your reviews and I'm sorry that this chapter made you feel sad.
Next one will be good, I promise ;)
Date: June 11, 2020 09:06 am Title: You start my day before the dawn
Now that's just cruel, 'how much was a dream...' for the sake of my sanity I'm going with none. Poor Jim. I like that they were both eager and showed up early, this can only mean good things I hope. I'm glad that Pam isn't too sad anymore, and I look forward to her finding happiness... With Jim of course.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review, DG! I'm not cruel, though, and I hope the next chapter will prove that ;)
1 [Report This]Date: June 11, 2020 08:31 am Title: You start my day before the dawn
Just to let you know this will be the 1000th review I've left here on MTT since I joined the site. Kind of a cool milestone and I figured I'd let you know.
So a decent amount of things going on here. Jim and Pam are continuing to progress in their relationship. Pam's still stressed out, but she seems to be holding up better too. Seems having an outlet for her art as well as girl time with her roommates.
I like this moment Jim is creating with Pam. It feels very much like how he would create moments with her in the early seasons of the show. However here there's no Roy in the way so that's a nice thing to think about.
Great banter between the two of them. Lots of fun. It also opened the door for a more meaningful conversation so that was nice to see too.
Lovely chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you, Warrior! And congratulations on your achievement!
Hope you'll enjoy the continuation as well.
Date: June 11, 2020 08:07 am Title: You start my day before the dawn
I LOVE this story so Lluch. Your writing is beautiful. I always feel like im traveling. I love how you describe every place.
Was the bee thing real or a dream? Can’t wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! And you'll find the answer in the next chapter :)