Date: July 24, 2020 03:21 am Title: Shots of Karaoke
I struggle with the formatting too so I have no clue how to fix the text size... It’s not the end of the world though, it’s definitely still readable.
“It was so¬†Scranton,¬†and she was supposed to be something different.” Damn that’s a good line. I can see evolved-Jim struggling so much with Karen in the context of Scranton.
This is fun. The drinking game works well, and the things they call each other out on all seem to fit their characters well.
I’m picturing like a second drinks Pam here with her inhibitions all the way down. Welcome to MTT! I wouldn’t be mad at all if you decided to add another chapter onto this...
Date: July 23, 2020 09:21 pm Title: Shots of Karaoke
So this was a lot of fun really. To see eveyone (mostly) loosen up and have a good time was nice to think about. Pam drunkely singing out an ABBA song to Jim is all kinds of adorable. Even if it's in the middle of the Season of Angst.
However it just stops. Is this a one-shot? Will there be more? I hope there will be more. It's great writing but no real conclusion. I'd love to see this continued. Will Pam in her drunken state call Jim and make some big declatation? Will the protective side of Jim come out and not allow Pam to stay at a bar when she's that drunk so he drives her home? Lots of questions about how this all pans out.
Still it was fun to read and I did enjoy it.