1 [Report This]Date: September 10, 2020 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 4
Ok there's the glimpse of hope I was looking for last chapter. Seems like Pam does have a clue as to what Roy's doing. No, those aren't displays of affection, they're him marking his territory. On her and for anyone to else to see. But the fact he is so brazen about it all again just makes me want to drive a fist in his face.
Good job Jim. Trust your gut here. But hold on tight. She's in deep and it's going to take some serious steel in your spine to get her out. Though should (when) you win the day, I've got a feeling that the relationship that will be formed with Jim and Pam will be like steel that's been heated, forged, quenched, and tempered. Great writing.
Date: September 10, 2020 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love Jim's prank! It totally seems like something that would have been in the show. It's always fun to mess with Dwight's desk in some way.
Jim's reaction is excellent, very true to his character. We get to see how his characteristic indecision plays out in a more serious situation. His battle between his heart and his brain comes to a head here, and I think the severity of Pam's situation realistically prods him to action earlier than in the show. Well done!