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Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2020 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 2: The Road

Happy to hear that even if Larissa isn't out of the woods things are looking up. Pam getting a nudge from Isabel was a nice touch! And creepily staring at a sleeping Jim is always a winner ;)

Reviewer: SES Signed [Report This]
Date: September 15, 2020 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 2: The Road

I’m already wondering if Jim heard Pam’s call with Isabel and heard what they said because he wasn’t as asleep as Pam thought.
Isabel’s comment about the art of the cold shoulder was dead in. Jim’s back and forth in S3 is one of the main reasons why he got on my nerves. Perhaps Pam helping him will get Jim to stop taking her for granted.
Please update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm almost done with the next update! Hopefully not too long before I can post it.

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: September 15, 2020 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 2: The Road

I am an absolute sucker for this genre of fic and I am really looking forward to seeing you play this out.

Author's Response: Thank you! Hopefully I don't let you down. It's kind of new territory for me.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 15, 2020 10:25 am Title: Chapter 2: The Road

Since this is early S3 and we don't have a lot of the angst of the mid season to suffer through, this seems to work good. Jim and Pam still not sure how they stand with each other. Yes they're friendly, but the friendship is strained. Which of course leads to all the thoughts bounching around in Pam's head.

Always good to get some perspective from an outside source. Good job there Iz. Really looking forward to seeing where we go with this story.

Author's Response: Thanks, Warrior! I didn't want this to take place too close to The Job, because I feel like they both needed to still be in limbo a little bit for it to work the way I want it to.

Reviewer: bottomlesschampagne Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 15, 2020 08:35 am Title: Chapter 2: The Road

You write and emote really well-- I am looking forward to this!

(love the "battle of the Jims"- describes season 3 'wishy-washy' Jim just perfectly)

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!

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