1 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2020 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 3: Grape Soda Relapse
“I guess when stuff like this happens, it’s nice to just go back to what’s familiar,” oooh double entendre Jim! Hope he realises how that applies to Pam too.
The rendition of the beach games lines worked really well for their real talk here, well done.
I'm glad that Jim has her sticking around!
Author's Response: Love me a good double entendre! Haha thanks, DG!
Date: September 16, 2020 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 3: Grape Soda Relapse
Ah. So nice to see them reconnecting again...
Author's Response: That’s when it starts getting good! Thanks for the review!
1 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2020 08:48 am Title: Chapter 3: Grape Soda Relapse
It’s nice to see that the channels
of communication are starting to open
between them.
I think the more it happens the
more Scranton Jim,
aka the real Jim will come out. I’m loving
that Pam is being more direct with her opinions instead of waiting until beach day.
Zero mention of Karen makes this chapter even better.
Author's Response: I’m also a big Pam of courageous Pam, so I’m letting her be forward a little sooner than we see in the show. Thanks for all your reviews!
1 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2020 08:04 am Title: Chapter 3: Grape Soda Relapse
You're welcome. It's always kinda fun to add in real life touches I think rather than just let everything reside in Genericville like on TV so they don't have to worry about copyright or trademark claims. Glad you could make use of that little tidbit.
Nice chapter here too. The inclusion of the lines from Beach Day added a lot. I really like that it's because Pam sees Jim come out with the Grape Soda that she has the courage to push a little. There's a sign her Jim the Real Jim is still there wanting to come through. So she does her best to help that along.
I really hope we get to see some quality Larissa messing with Jim type scenes. Those can get a ton of fun.
Author's Response: It’ll probably be a chapter or two away, but we will definitely see some Halpert family shenanigans! I want to keep the story from Pam’s POV so I’m working on a way to get them all together.