1 [Report This]Date: August 13, 2021 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 7: Better Than I Used to Be
Jim standing in the doorway, saying, “He Does.” Perfection! This is the very first review I’ve ever written - that’s how much I enjoyed this! :)
1 [Report This]Date: August 13, 2021 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 7: Better Than I Used to Be
Jim standing in the doorway, saying, “He Does.” Perfection! This is the very first review I’ve ever written - that’s how much I enjoyed this! :)
1 [Report This]Date: September 20, 2020 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 7: Better Than I Used to Be
Okay so this is just all sorts of adorable. Larissa is great with Pam. I get why Pam starts out feeling like it's an interrogation, but in the end Larissa is there to really help Pam get across the finish line about her feelings. And the prize for crossing that line is Jim right there. I love that they just fall into each other's arms when they get back to the hotel. Even though it's just a serious make out session, there's all sorts of steam building up under the surface. Great images there. Lovely chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you, Warrior! I :) Even steamy make out sessions are out of my writing comfort zone, so I’m glad you liked it! :)
1 [Report This]Date: September 20, 2020 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 7: Better Than I Used to Be
I love this. The slow burn is always more exciting :)
Author's Response: Thank you!! I agree. ;)
Date: September 20, 2020 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 7: Better Than I Used to Be
D'awww. The Jim-Larissa dynamic is adorable, and I love that you're bringing it all back the end of the Job, because really, it would be a shame for them to lose out on that.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I have had a lot of fun writing Jim and Larissa, so I’m glad you liked it!