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Reviewer: nicemorningtoo Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 14, 2021 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 8: Amendments

Loved this so much. Larissa was amazing, I loved her sense of humor and how caring she was to both Jim and Pam, even with her jokes thrown in. And then her eavesdropping on him about Karen only for him to eavesdrop on her, I know you know this already, but when he said "He does" my jaw DROPPED. I think my heart stopped beating. Also, “Yup,” she breathed as he brushed his hand under her blouse along the small of the back." hi yes this killed me. expect a bill for my funeral shortly.

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 23, 2020 05:59 am Title: Chapter 8: Amendments

This story was a whole lot of fun! Larissa was lovely. It felt very light and fluffy despite the premise. I’m glad everything worked out okay - in terms of Larissa’s injury and JAM. Very, very sweet!

Author's Response: Thank you, Jenna! I may have given Larissa a quick recovery just to put Jim in a headspace where he was ready to be with Pam, and also so we could see some of Jim and Larissa together because I love writing their relationship. Haha but I’m glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22, 2020 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 8: Amendments

This was a really lovely way to wrap this up. Nice job.

Author's Response: Thank you!!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21, 2020 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 8: Amendments

Nice way to wrap this up. I liked how they were able to progress and heal their relationship. Once they got back together they're great.

All the amendments there at Jim's place were the icing on the cake. Great job with this.

Fortes Fortuna Adiuvat
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