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Reviewer: Anne-Rose Sweetkins Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2023 03:42 pm Title: Scranton City Limits, Sometime in 2013

Aww I thought it was Jim going to Stamford but then the twist is when they move to Austin. So sweet.

Author's Response: They kill me, these two. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: BigTuna Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2021 08:56 pm Title: Scranton City Limits, Sometime in 2013

I love 55 words because you have to strip everything down into something meaningful and with no filler, which is really hard to do. You have done this gorgeously. How does it feel to be so talented, you jerk?

Author's Response: What are you asking me for? How *does* it feel to be so talented?

I'm glad you liked this one! Thanks for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: Saturn Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2021 04:24 am Title: Scranton City Limits, Sometime in 2013

In a mere 55 words, you make my heart squeeze with joy? Dwight would probably accuse you of witchcraft for this.

Author's Response: Sorry, Dwight. But I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for taking her time to review.

Reviewer: Maxine Abbott Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: June 03, 2021 06:13 pm Title: Scranton City Limits, Sometime in 2013

When DJC comes up in the random story - you have to read again (55 words makes in a no brainer). It was even better the second time especially as as I think about all the times I turned to face the kids in the backseat of the car. Now they are the ones driving it.

Author's Response: Hmmmm. Kinda makes me think of a follow up...

Reviewer: WanderingWatchtower Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 17, 2020 10:26 pm Title: Scranton City Limits, Sometime in 2013

Oh, I just love this and I love those Halperts. What a great use of 55 words. :)

Author's Response: They are very inspiring! Thank you!

Reviewer: Sam Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 17, 2020 01:59 pm Title: Scranton City Limits, Sometime in 2013

This (short but) lovely. I feel it.
Thanks!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 17, 2020 12:24 pm Title: Scranton City Limits, Sometime in 2013

So very sweet! And so very true. Once again coming through with a truly perfect disclaimer!

Author's Response: I have a brand, I need to live up to it. :)

Reviewer: DoomGoose Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 17, 2020 12:05 pm Title: Scranton City Limits, Sometime in 2013

I mean, I'm all for it. This got a chuckle and a smile for sure, that was a great twist on the usual sort of thing we see for some of these 55 challenges. Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you!!!

Reviewer: Maxine Abbott Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 17, 2020 05:46 am Title: Scranton City Limits, Sometime in 2013

so true!!!! And scene. Wonderful.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: epj27 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2020 04:37 pm Title: Scranton City Limits, Sometime in 2013

Love this! So cute! Thank you for sharing.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: Clover Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2020 03:48 pm Title: Scranton City Limits, Sometime in 2013

Awwwww, LOVE THIS!
A perfect vignette! I can see them all!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2020 03:44 pm Title: Scranton City Limits, Sometime in 2013

Oh this is just all sorts of sweet. Great way to bring in a ton of emotion with great economy of words. Loved it.

Author's Response: Thank you! Getting this down to 55 words was... not easy.

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