Date: November 23, 2020 04:45 am Title: Chapter 12
Bit of a rollercoaster this time around. Karen is still being not-so-subtle in her via for Jim's affections. That's a thread that keeps popping up and and I wonder where it's going to lead.
Lovely to see Jim and Pam being more like their canon selves in the office. Partners in crime and just having fun with each other. They really bring out the best in each other and that came through here.
Betsy showing up was a lovely touch. She's warm, loving, and patient. Another person in Pam's corner and that's a great thing. After so many years of thinking she was alone, the more people she can gather round her who love and support her, the better.
Foreboding news about Kenny. He always seemed more like Roy's lackey than anything, but him being free doesn't sound good. Still some insecurites there at the end with Pam. As much as I'd love her to be really free from everything, by now, her feeling do ring true to real life though. Getting over everything she's been through will take a long time regardless of how great her support system is. Especially when there are constant reminders of everything.
Still doing a great job with this one.
Date: November 22, 2020 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 12
I love the ease between Pam and Betsy here, and the kindness Betsy shows here - clearly, part of what has made Jim such a good partner for Pam in this story is that he's been raised right.
I really liked the comic relief here too - you do such a good job mixing that in. The reference to the balloon is a great Easter egg.
Tough to have an otherwise pretty solid day end with such ugly news. Very worried about how Kenny's going to react now that he's out in the world again.