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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: October 22, 2021 10:52 am Title: Chapter 46

Oooof. Brutal note to end this one on. I think the digging into Pam's trauma and the ways in which the trial isn't going to represent some sort of final victory over it is a good choice - there's not a way to end this story neatly and tie up all the loose ends, and they're going to have to come to grips with that.

Reviewer: Merria Signed [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2021 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 46

This is a fantastic chapter. I think a lot of us have gone down the proverbial rabbit whole, I can understand Pam feeling that way.
I hope you made it out of your own hole safely and stronger for it. I can’t wait to read more
Many jellybeans

Reviewer: lesser Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2021 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 46

Bah! Well now you pulled me back in. Hope it's not too long a wait to read the next part. Thanks for coming back to this one. :)

Reviewer: grc73 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2021 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 46

Oh my word! What a cliffhanger! Very well written as always, so much pathos. Let’s hope Pam’s reached her nadir and it’s all up from here on in!

Reviewer: New Hogfan Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18, 2021 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 46

What is happening with Pam?!
Is her mental/emotional trauma causing
her to become catatonic?
Roy’s mom is a nasty bitch!
It’s no wonder Roy is so messed up.
At least Helene’s testimony wasn’t too damaging to Pam’s case.
I have to admit that I’m nervous about
Roy not being convicted by the jury.
Also what is going on at the office while
the trial is going on?
Did the rest of the DM characters find out
what has been happening?
Please update soon!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18, 2021 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 46

This feels like a very real response to the trauma Pam has endured. Especially with having to re-live it all in court. She's going through a lot of peaks and valleys to be sure. Some are worse than others and clearly this one is a lot worse. Especially in the loop of thinking she's in right now. She spent years being conditioned to think those things. It makes sense that it would take as long if not longer to heal from those wounds. But however dark it is for her right now, she has a support system that is there for her.

Really liked that Jim and the Beeslys closed ranks around Pam with Roy's mom showed up. You could tell she wanted to do more, but her cowards heart showed its colors when faced with the bravery of Jim and Pam's family. Nice to have that bright spot in a dark chapter.

Reviewer: AuroraKat83 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 18, 2021 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 46

Aigh! You can't leave us on this cliff hanger! Sad face!!!
Ooo Roy's mom makes me so angry. I would have loved to see her get hauled off and put behind bars 🤭
Pam is actually not responsive to Jim now? Oh this is not good. It's gonna be OK soon, Pam! Jim's gonna take good care of you, you'll see!

You've got me hooked and I can't wait for more. Loving this story 💕

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