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Reviewer: PBJ sandwich Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: June 26, 2021 02:17 pm Title: The One That's Jim

I really like your writing style and am enjoying this story so much!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm so glad you're enjoying it!  :D

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2021 11:13 pm Title: The One That's Jim

A flashback within a flashback! Creative. And the Italian food reference was great. I can picture Pam blushing while talking about it and her mom not really getting why.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2021 08:21 pm Title: The One That's Jim

Kind of fun to get this glimpse into Jim's mind. The quick recap of his relationship with Pam with the day they first met, along with the day Helene showed up for work and he overheard her asking about him. It looks like Helene's taken a shine to him too and Pam seems very happy to introduce her mother to a favorite place to eat. Nice job.

Author's Response:

You remember when he confessed his love for "Italian food" and it was really her he was talking about?

 

*Swoon*

 

Thank you for reading and reviewing.  :) 

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