Date: December 06, 2006 11:09 am Title: Chapter 1
Aww, somehow I'd never read this before, but I love it. So sweet.
Date: October 28, 2006 04:56 am Title: Chapter 1
aww *heart melts* soo cute...towards the end it started to remind me of When Harry Met Sally...haha i was actually waiting for the kiss and instead she says "i love you too, Jim" soo adorable just the same anyway I really liked it, it was really well written and I like the whole snow tubing idea soo, great story, i really enjoyed
Date: July 17, 2006 02:25 am Title: Chapter 1
Great work Tabitha! I can picture the situation perfectly: the warm lodge, the cold car... This: "Not clean or new, or like shampoo or laundry detergent or perfume; but fresh, and beautiful" is just lovely, it's exactly the way I imagine Jim might describe Pam. And the end, :dies:.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I appreciate it :)
Date: July 15, 2006 04:14 am Title: Chapter 1
Awww! I loved this! So sweet!
Author's Response: Thanks Lindsey!
Date: July 14, 2006 03:29 am Title: Chapter 1
Sooo sweet! :D
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: July 14, 2006 02:18 am Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! It seemed like you had some tense discrepancies in the first half, but other than that it was really sweet and well-written.
Author's Response: Thank you for pointing that out - I've had that problem before and no matter how hard I try I still end up switching from past to present. Noted! Thank you :)