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Reviewer: maryc Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2024 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

Thank you for not giving up on this story! The ending was delightful and definitely worth the wait.

Reviewer: grc73 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 30, 2024 02:13 am Title: Chapter 12

Absolutely delighted to see this one back at the top of the updated stories, thanks for finishing it, absolutely worth the wait! Lovely ending.

Author's Response:

Thank you very much! 

I can't believe it was almost 4 years. Thanks for sticking around! 

Reviewer: MrsKHalpert Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 29, 2024 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 12

Sad to see this story finish but glad of got such a happy ending. And at Schrute Farms too 😂
Jim needing to comb his hair really cracked me up.
Thank you so much for sharing this fic with us. Looking forward to your next!!

Author's Response:

I guess I needed an excuse to put some Dwight and Angela at the end of this fic. 

Thanks very much for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 29, 2024 09:57 am Title: Chapter 12

Awww, very cute. Glad that after everything they do end up together like this. And to get married at Schrute farms is a lot of fun to imagine as well.

Nice job with this one. A few ups and downs, a few missed turns, but they make it to where they're supposed to be. Thanks for bringing this one to a lovely close.

Fortes Fortuna Adiuvat

Author's Response:

Thanks very much. Although Angela and Dwight don't play a really important role in the fic, I had fun writing them so, why not. Also I can imagine Pam proposing to get parried at Shrute's and Jim thinking she's nuts but agreeing nonetheless.

Thanks for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08, 2023 11:46 am Title: Chapter 11

Ah finally! Some nice open communication from the two of them. I'm kind of glad Jim didn't let her off the hook here. Granted he was mostly gentle about it, but he had the right to tell her that she made a rash decision without even giving him a chance to talk to her about it. I'm glad she was open to listening to him though.

And it seems like the little break the little break they had helped him to focus on what's really important. Not just the amount of money in his paycheck but the people who make life worthwhile. Thank goodness for Lewis and his moment of courage. Once that kid is ungrounded he probably deserves something nice.

And of course now Jim and Pam are back together again. Very touching scene as she's the one to re-initiate contact and it builds to a very sweet kiss. Bravo.

Kinda feels like we're about to wrap this one up. Looking forward to seeing how that all pans out.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing! And ye, I'm about to wrap it out vut I sill don't know exactly where or when. It'll come to me intime, I'm sure. 

Till then! 

Reviewer: MrsKHalpert Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 08, 2023 07:45 am Title: Chapter 11

SUCH A GOOD CHAPTER!!! The angst and their conversation was so well written. AND THEY KISSED AND MADE UP!! I'm sad that I feel like we're nearing the end of this, but I'm loving the journey!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewibg and sorry it took me forever to get back to you.

You're right, the story is ending, but I'm not quite sure how to wrap it up just yet. I do want to write Dwight again and that's as far as I've got so far (:

Thanks again! 

Reviewer: WithaY Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2023 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 10

I'm so glad this is back!! I love this divergent canon story and oh the feels when you used Pam's canon dialogue from casino night... ahhhhhh!! I don't know why Pam is so afraid that she isn't enough for Jim when he's clearly told her she is... but I also don't understand why Jim wasn't up front with her about the contract either. Hmmm sounds like canon issues, doesn't it?!

Jim is definitely father material here in this chapter, making sure Pam knows Lewis is safe and also, what a great job Pam has done in raising kids who are this empathetic! On the other hand, they've unfortunately been in situations that are making them act as tiny adults, which is also sad.

Can't wait to see what Pam has to say when Jim brings Lewis home! And I'm very glad Jim did not drive Lewis home under the influence. Just another great example on how Jim is all in for Pam--and her boys. Thanks for this great story!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing!

I'm trying to navigate Jimm and Pam's canon issues, as you put it, with the fact that over 15 years have passed and they are both different people. 

About the kids having to be like tiny adults... at some point I considered bringing Roy into the scene and show those dynamics, but it doesn't really add to this story. But yeah, as I see it, these kids have seen their mom go through a lot, and some of it has affected their behaviours.

Next chapter is on its way, hold on tight! 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2023 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 10

Ouch! That hurt to start out the chapter like that. Not only because she broke it off like that, but because their old nemesis miscommunication strikes again. She's assuming things about him before he has a chance to explain anything. So once more Pam denies to herself what she could truly have. She needs to take the chance but can't. Yeah, that hurts. I do kinda feel ok for Jim unloading on her like that. He really tried and then he also didn't go begging after her. Tough but admirable.

Then Lewis shows up out of the blue and gives a more clear picture about everything. Nice to see there's still a sliver of hope starting to peak through. Hopefully this one more chance will be the moment it really comes together.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! The chapter had a ton of typos and I've just fixed it...

Yeah! Exactly. I was wondering how much of the old Pam was still there, after a divorce and raising two kids on her own, but I guess the miscommunication things are still very much a part of how she is with Jim even though they try foor that not to happen.

And then Jim shutting off as well. He could've followed her, he could've called again, but he's hurt and when he is he recoils.

You know one of the first things i had in my mind writting this was for Lewis to show at Jim's door, but I hadn't quite figure out why or how. But well, there he was :) 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2023 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 9

Great to be getting back to this one. Love that Jim and Pam are really starting to build something here. However the distance and everything with his job is something that's still causing anxiety. Which makes sense.

What I also love is that Jim is doing his best to be clear with her. He wants to be involved with her and wants her to trust him. Feels like he's giving her every reason to as well. Now she finds the paperwork with the move to Austin and it's not signed. Clearly he's waiting for something there. Hopefully we'll find out in the next chapter.

Author's Response:

At this point, I think, Jim has the whole thing more or less figured out, but Pam is not there yet. She has doubts, and much more to lose than him.

 Thanks very much for your review! 

Reviewer: Invisiblecynic Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2023 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 10

I was excited to a ridiculous degree when I saw you'd posted new chapters. This is one of the stories that I really, r e a l l y, wanted more of. Great chapters! I feel terrible for Pam & even Philly Jim. Way to go Lewis!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!!!

The fact that I couldn't finish this story was really bothering me... for years! 

But now I have it all figured out and the last (lasts?) chapter is on its way. 


Reviewer: Yeza Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2023 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

wow, interesting turn of events. I was imagining some sort of misunderstanding between the two, which they would eventually work out, but not Pam running off without explanation. Good thing she has a son who cares about her. I look forward to the next meeting between Jim and Pam.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I was wondering while writing this how much of the "old Pam" should I keep and how much could've changed after more than 15 years, two kids and a divorce. But I guess the misscomunication problems would still be there, which is why she just leaves. She had been hurt before and she doesn't want to feel that again.

Reviewer: Receptionitis15 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2023 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 10

I binge read this last night then saw this pop up today before I'd logged in to write my review and wow what a rollercoaster of emotions I just went on! Last night I was on a high thinking okay a bit of uncertainty there but nothing they can't talk through... then 24h later I'm reading Pam left! Totally understand why though it's intense and when faced with that information alone and nobody to talk it through with she did what she felt would overall be the easiest solution with lower drawn-out pain, end on a high. I love that Lewis went all the way to Jim's! True mama's boys and proof they don't take after their father in this story. Hopefully they can work out something between them, though with them both established in their lives at this stage it won't be easy. Loving this story though!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for binge reading and for leaving such a geberous review.

Of course, the reasonable would've been for Pam to wait for Jim and ask, but at the time she's having some doubts of her own. She's scared. And this gives her a way out and, as you put it, a chance to end on a high.

She's not ok, though. Nor is Jim.


Reviewer: MrsKHalpert Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2023 10:41 am Title: Chapter 10

Such a good chapter, but oh god that hurt all over again. Please fix it asap as possible

Author's Response: Thanks very much! The end is near and I'm a sucker for happy endings so... don't fear. :)

Reviewer: MrsKHalpert Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2023 09:16 am Title: Chapter 9

I can’t tell you how happy I am to see this fic got updated!! It’s one of my faves! Really can’t wait to see what happens with Austin 😬😬

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! It finally, finally worked out! The story, I mean. Jim and Pam have still some stuff to figure out.

Reviewer: MamaLo Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 05, 2023 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 9

Thrilled to have this story alive again!!!

Author's Response:

I'm thrilled people are still reading it! Thanks so much!

Next chapter is almost ready :) 

Reviewer: grc73 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05, 2023 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 9

Lovely to have this back! Great chapter too.

Author's Response: Thanks very much! The next chapter is almost ready, and the next one half-written, so I'm almost sure I will finish this story this time!

Reviewer: Yeza Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 05, 2023 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

I never thought I would read a new chapter of this story -one of my favorites, by the way- again. In fact I had already downloaded it as if the story was already complete, to reread it from time to time. So thank you for this unexpected gift.
I feel that Pam is going to have to decide a lot of things soon that will change her life completely. Or will Jim be the one to do it?. I look forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I'm sorry about the long wait. So.ewhat the story was refusing to continue and the, a couple of days ago, I woke up and had it all clear in front of me. So, let's hope the muses stick around for a bit.

Thanks for your support! 


Reviewer: Yeza Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 27, 2022 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 8

Pam and Jim make a good couple in middle age. I love the story!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you liked it

Reviewer: Maxine Abbott Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 18, 2022 04:49 am Title: Chapter 6

Getting reacquainted with this one so I can get to your latest update. Really love your Pam Dwight friendship here.
PLus I'm always up for a trip down memory lane.

Love that Angela even offered to babysit.

Even though it was Angela and Dwight, it was nice that after Jim was gone she wasn't alone.

Great chapter.

Author's Response:

So, first of all sorry I am replying to this over a year later! There is honestly no excuse. 

 And of course there i no excuse for the fact that it's taking me so long in finishig this story.

Anyway, there is a new chapter. I hope you like it. Thanks so much!! 

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2022 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 8

KURI! YAY! Happy to see you return, and VERY happy to hear you've managed to corral this one into working order. Looking forward to seeing how all this ends up playing out.

There's a lot of very interesting vibes in this chapter - Pam's sense of nervousness about the future and about fitting into this life he has that's so different from hers and her sense of loss of what could have been in their past, Jim trying to make her a full part of his life and make sure his life works with hers. There's a bit of a Season 9 feel to it, except mainly tinged with hope instead of despair. I'm intruiged.

And bringing Jim's dad's death back into this was a really nice touch.

Welcome back! We've missed you.

Author's Response:

YAY! Thanks so much! 

This story is misbehaving, but I will finish it whatever it takes, lol.

Thanks again for sticking to it! 

Reviewer: Invisiblecynic Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 14, 2022 08:45 am Title: Chapter 8

Really excited to get an update! So much in this chapter to digest. Pam feels a bit surprised by and out of place in Jim's world which is understandable. She has only spent time with "casual Jim". I hope she is right, that "Jim was Jim. No matter where he happened to be."

I think it would be difficult for Pam and the boys to move to Philly. She has a support system and they're at that age where friendships are important. Her job may not be high-profile, like his is, but she loves it, it's important to her and something she sacrificed to achieve.

Time will tell if it is too difficult for Jim to permanently return to Scranton. It sounds as if he may be realizing spending time with his family as well as Pam's is where his heart lies.

It's swoon-worthy to find that the love they had for each other has remained through everything else.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review! 

I had a major writers' block but it's finally over. 

Yeah, you got it right. Apparently, Pam can't move. And Jim either. A bit of a dilemma.


Reviewer: Sam Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 13, 2022 09:09 am Title: Chapter 1

I'm really enjoying this! I really like their backstories, and the way you've dealt with the ways their baggage has affected them. Love the Dwight and Angela stuff too. Great work!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I hope you like the rest 

Reviewer: MrsKHalpert Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 13, 2022 01:30 am Title: Chapter 8

I have just literally reread Zoom Meetings and this popped up, so I’m so happy to see you’re back on this one! Really enjoying this Jim and Pam and the story so far. Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I hope to finish this one soon, I'm happy you like it so far :)

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 12, 2022 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 8

So I went back and re-read all of this. Not a bad thing mind you. Nice to see that they're both putting effort into this new relationship of theirs. Pam being willing to come to Philly and see him. Very much a good sign.

Loved that they can finally say out loud what should have been said so many years ago. Nice moment. Then it seems like Jim has some steel in his spine. Saying no to work on this weekend that Pam's in town and making sure he's free next weekend too. Nice to see he's doing his best to make her a priority. The banter afterwards was just a treat to read.

Glad to see this one again for sure.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

This story is proving to be hard to continue, but I will.   

Reviewer: Invisiblecynic Signed [Report This]
Date: July 02, 2021 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

Just reread this for the third(?) time. It's a wonderful story and damn it future Pam and Jim deserve some happiness. Pam's trajectory is so believable and the way they got pulled back into each other's orbits as well. I hope to see an update soon!

Author's Response:

Thanks so very much! Next chapter is on its way and I finally figured out how to finish the story so... :) 

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