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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 17, 2020 08:37 pm Title: It barely took a breath to realize, We're gonna be a classic for all time -Gwen Stefani You Make it Feel like Christmas

This prank was well worth Pam’s week of wondering – he decorated a Christmas tree with their history! It’s incredibly cute. And the fact that it began a holiday tradition is wonderful – them making their history a part of their family’s future, acknowledging the road it took to get them there. Certainly something you want to remember when things get tough – and having Pam thinking about that history during the post-AARM Christmas as she starts to plan where the road takes them next is a lovely bit of icing on the cake.

I love the details you threw in here – Pam planning to troll him with the tuna, the callback to Michael’s birthday, Michael’s horrible (although hilarious) gift idea for Ryan. And bringing in Oscar’s origami skills was great. At least *someone* appreciated them, documentary crew.

The challenge of writing Christmas fic while making sure the menorah gets lit every night is REAL.

Author's Response:

 

The struggle IS real. But my lights got lit every night and I hope I did Christmas true.

So you were on to it early but hopefully there were still a few surprises for you in the end. 

Writing this story had me all warm and fuzzy as I thought back on all the things I could include on the tree and all the ways Jim would have to hide them from Pam. 

 

Sorry they had to watch Frequency - but I did think your idea was hysterical. I'd love to see how often that movie can be tied into a fic - it'll be one of those inside jokes I've always wanted to be part of - wink wink.

 

I knew you would appreciate the details:

The gift idea for Michael had me deep diving on Internet and the next time I need a housewarming gift I know what I'm getting. Also - I had another Office Ladies moment. The Juicy Couture sweatsuit idea from Kelly was written BEFORE they talked about it on the podcast but you should have seen my smile when they talked about it.

The origami was inspired by Oscar but also by the tree at the Museum of Natural History - living in the city with young kids we were always there and I remember how in awe I was of the three when it went up each year. It really is magnificent. I put this link up after you read the story but in case you are interested in seeing the inspiration:

https://www.amnh.org/exhibitions/origami-holiday-tree 

 I'm glad you enjoyed the first jump to the future. 

Thanks as always for being a great reviewer -  it's always such fun to read them. 

 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 17, 2020 05:49 pm Title: It barely took a breath to realize, We're gonna be a classic for all time -Gwen Stefani You Make it Feel like Christmas

Lovely as always. Again I really like all the little details you put in. Oscar's origami, the shag carpet of Jim's parents house, and of course everything on the tree itself.

The perfect way to wash away the fears and doubt Pam had over the course of the week. Especially with the flash forward there and Pam starting to consider her own big Jim gesture.

Author's Response:

Thank you and thanks again for the early beta review.

Another inspiration came from a tree I saw at the Museum of Natural History (living in NYC with kids was a wonderful thing - we went there a lot - my son even did a sleepover there when he was young) they had a tree in lobby with all origami  and it was so cool. In fact I think I may add a photo to my story notes.

 

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