1 [Report This]Date: January 07, 2021 06:49 pm Title: Steal My Heart and Hold My Tongue
Awwww Pam. My heart hurts for you.
Girl, you wrote their drinking scene SO well. You can feel how tortured Jim is when he looks at her, trying to steer his mind away from thoughts of loving her without any obstacles in the way. But he’s taking care of her so well, far better than Roy would. Of course, Roy is the reason she is drinking, so it’s fitting that Jim is doing a better job taking care of her. You nailed this chapter. That’s what she said?
1 [Report This]Date: January 03, 2021 09:37 pm Title: Steal My Heart and Hold My Tongue
Well, as much as I wish Jim could drive down to SC to knock Roy out, I really hope he stays with Pam overnight!
Poor thing, she needed the drinks.
Loved this WW!
1 [Report This]Date: January 01, 2021 09:30 pm Title: Steal My Heart and Hold My Tongue
I am so invested in this story. All of it is perfection. Her inner monologue while he’s there after finding her ring—and you snuck in a wet Jim, you minx—and his perspective from the next day is so good and so true to character, it’s hard to believe this isn’t canon. And is it wrong of me to hope that Roy is trickle-truthing and that there’s more to the story so that Pam has a good hard reason to be done immediately? If it’s is wrong, I don’t wanna be right.
Fantastic job, lady. Can’t wait for the next update!
1 [Report This]Date: January 01, 2021 10:51 am Title: Steal My Heart and Hold My Tongue
oh poor Pam! Please update soon!
Date: December 31, 2020 03:40 pm Title: Steal My Heart and Hold My Tongue
There you go driving the stakes in deeper with everything. I completely get why Jim would want to burn that shirt. Just another layer of tension he has to endure.
I really like how he's there for Pam when she comes in. She knows she can talk to him, he's not pushy, but he's still there.
Drunk Pam really loosens up here doesn't she? Nice to see her let go of some of the guards she has in place. Even better when she opens up to Jim about the reason for the fight.
Roy being a jerk even when he's not there. He probably thought he could get away with his incident. First he leaves Pam by herself, then can't stay loyal to her, the guy doesn't deserve Pam pure and simple.
Then Jim finding the painting and Pam asking him to stay? Oh holy crap, here we go. While the tension seemed to be at a low boil until now, the temperature is steadily growing. Seems it won't be long till everything boils over.
1 [Report This]Date: December 31, 2020 11:52 am Title: Steal My Heart and Hold My Tongue
I love the way he’s just such a salve for Pam here – and in the way that she needs, rather than the way he wants to be or indulging his curiosity about their fight. And it works, because we end up with a Drunk!Pam sighting! Drunk Pam is way up there on the list of best Pams.
This was well-designed – the exact comments Pam makes at the bar make a lot more sense once we know what the fight with Roy was about. And ugh. Roy. Roy is just the worst. Seriously. He sucks. He sucks and he does not deserve that gravel business.
There are some big things happening right now (HE FOUND THE PAINTING AND SHE ASKED HIM TO STAY), but I like how you also keep bringing it back to how all the little things between them get to him – the single heart emoji, grabbing his wrist.
P.S. Jim should’ve stuck with the ransom plan. He doesn’t even need Roy to make the trade, just let Pam see a second of hesitation.
1 [Report This]Date: December 31, 2020 11:48 am Title: Steal My Heart and Hold My Tongue
Ughhhhh WW, you're going to kill me. The story is amazing and then...AND THEN...you leave us at this kind of cliffhanger?!
Amazing. I'll love you forever for this story though since it's so fun.
Drunk Pam. So different from my drunk Pam and I throughly enjoyed reading it haha.
1 [Report This]Date: December 31, 2020 10:47 am Title: Steal My Heart and Hold My Tongue
The chapter title already had me dying before I had read a single word of the actual chapter. Before I get to the obvious perfection that is drunk Pam, I want to say that I loved that Jim not only uses pranks against Dwight to fight off boredom, but also as a distraction against Pam.
Okay but onto the thing we really care about. Drunk Pam. I'm glad that Jim had the courage to ask her to drinks and that she said yes. And then how it started off as just hanging out quickly turned into Jim supervising Pam after her second fight with Roy. Her enthusiastic "Nope!"s and her "ew" to Roy's shirt have me cracking up.
And then they get back to her apartment and she's making TWSS jokes. I adore that so, so, *so* much. "Don't tell me what to do, Halpert." Is MTT available in heaven? Because I'm literally going to die.
and *then* he wanted to kiss her. and *THEN* he found the painting. *AND THEN* SHE ASKED HIM TO STAY. AND YOU LEFT US THERE. I need the next chapter like last week, please.
P.S. I freaking hate Roy. Have I said that? I feel like I haven't said it enough. How dare he kiss a random girl and then not even tell her about it until she made him after overhearing Kenny? I feel so bad for her, and for Jim who has to hear stuff like that and not be able to do anything about it. Ugh. Don't mind me, I'll just be over here crying over Jim's lovesick heart.
P.P.S. If the next chapter doesnt open with him at her place in the morning I'm suing.