Date: February 21, 2021 02:21 pm Title: Air I
I'll probably never understand why people see Jim's behaviour towards Pam as wrong. Towards Karen maybe, though when someone tells you they have feelings for another, you get involved at your own risk. But with Pam it was supposed to be awkward an painful and honestly I'd keep my distance too. I always saw it as a pretty realistic part of the show.
Anyway, loving the whole idea of feelings reflecting the nature and containing such strong emotions in a few short lines. Even if I'd gladly see something longer from you ;-) Cheers from the neighbouring country!
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1 [Report This]Date: January 25, 2021 04:56 am Title: Air I
Just read all of these, and wow! They read like poetry; very insightful and evocative.
Sorry to hear about your diagnosis, and hope you're feeling better soon. Take care.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your lovely review! I keep my fingers crossed for the best scenario in my case.
1 [Report This]Date: January 13, 2021 09:01 am Title: Air I
Late on reading and reviewing (as per usual).
I love this idea. 1 AM tends to give us some of the most brilliant ideas, thank you for running with this one.
The imagery in this is beautiful, and it captures her fear and budding flower of confidence very well.
Can't wait for the rest of this series, it's already off to an amazing start!
Author's Response: Thank you, Em! I still don't know how long I'll keep going, but I'm still excited with this idea :)
1 [Report This]Date: January 11, 2021 05:39 am Title: Air I
These are all beautiful little gems.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
1 [Report This]Date: January 05, 2021 06:39 pm Title: Air I
Hi, this made me cry. It is beautiful and poignant and heartbreaking. Excellently done.
Author's Response: Oh, I hate that you cried :( but thank you for your kind words!..
1 [Report This]Date: January 04, 2021 10:06 am Title: Air I
This sounds like a really good project! And I love the way you've started off here - you've created a really vivid image that's totally on point with where Pam is at this moment. Very poetic.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked this piece. I have no idea what I'll write next, but I'm excited to find out :)
Date: January 04, 2021 08:06 am Title: Air I
It's good to challenge yourself! What a good way to get your writing juices flowing.
This was lovely.
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope I'll won't give up on this challenge quickly.
Date: January 04, 2021 05:41 am Title: Air I
Awww, heartborken Pam. Very fitting considering the time frame. Nice job.
Author's Response: Thank you, Warrior! I can promise I'll write about happy Pam as well :)
1 [Report This]Date: January 04, 2021 04:47 am Title: Air I
this was so poetic. and I love the idea. Morning music to send me off on my day.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it and I hope you'll have a lovely day :)