1 [Report This]Date: January 13, 2021 09:03 am Title: Air II
Aw Jim!
Loved this one! I love their shared goal of giving each other their everything. This warmed my heart!
Author's Response: Aww, I'm glad you like this one! Thank you!
Date: January 05, 2021 06:40 pm Title: Air II
Freaking MORE POETRY oh my god. These are so good. I will take 100, please, tysm
Author's Response: Thank you so much, BT! I can't promise 100 (I feel I'll ask for prompts at some point, lol), but there are some more coming :)
1 [Report This]Date: January 05, 2021 02:23 pm Title: Air II
The "She needed to make everything he’d ever owned hers/On his lips she tasted the same greed" combo is a really good description of what the desire they have for each other must feel like.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I was nervous a bit about publishing this part ('isn't it OOC?' 'isn't it too much?'), but I'm glad it suits well to the characters.
1 [Report This]Date: January 05, 2021 08:17 am Title: Air II
Dernhelm, these are amazing! I can’t wait to keep reading them as you post them. Beautiful writing!
Author's Response: Thank you very much, WW! I'm so glad you like these pieces. Tomorrow will be more :)
1 [Report This]Date: January 05, 2021 04:41 am Title: Air II
I LOVE the concept of this and you are incredibly talented at poetry. I’m looking forward to the rest of these. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Bored! I didn't expect that I could write poetry at all and I truly appreciate your kindness!
1 [Report This]Date: January 05, 2021 02:45 am Title: Air II
That's a delightful way of writing a short but intimate scene. Great job.
Author's Response: Thank you, Warrior! I'm still insecure about writing things like that, so I'm glad it worked out well.