Reviews For The Elements
Reviewer: emxgoldstars Signed [Report This]
Date: January 13, 2021 09:32 am Title: Air III
Date: January 13, 2021 09:32 am Title: Air III
Aw yay! Cece's here!
What great words to describe childbirth. Painful, but what beauty lies at the other side.
Loved this one!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2021 08:28 pm Title: Air III
Date: January 09, 2021 08:28 pm Title: Air III
The full circle of life in 110 words. Lovely.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 
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Date: January 09, 2021 05:29 pm Title: Air III
1 [Report This]Date: January 09, 2021 05:29 pm Title: Air III
Love this one as a counterpoint to last chapter. Even though I'm a guy and will never know that kind of experience, I did see that look on my wife's face a few months ago. The pain immediately turning to love and relief as our son took his first breaths. Really great job with this one.
Author's Response: Thank you! My brain mercifully blocked out most of my memories of that experience, but I'm glad I still have pleasant ones :)