Reviews For The Elements
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Reviewer: Once Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14, 2021 12:50 pm Title: Water II

I really like this one. I'm a sucker for a good ending line.

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked it :) 

Reviewer: emxgoldstars Signed [Report This]
Date: January 13, 2021 09:40 am Title: Water II

OOOOOOOF my heart.

Great again, Dernhelm. I'm again left speechless

Author's Response: I'm thrilled with your reviews, Em. Thank YOU! 

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: January 12, 2021 06:55 am Title: Water II

Poor Jim. He might have a harder time getting over it than he thinks he will. I'm just guessing. :)

"Fingerprints she'd left on his heart" is a good line!

Author's Response: You're guessing just right :) 
Thank you! 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 12, 2021 06:48 am Title: Water II

Oh Jim. If only you knew what was really in store for you. Still her fingerprints on his heart is such a great line. You can tell he's trying, but he also knows it won't be any good. Hang in there buddy. There will be better days ahead.

Author's Response: Yeah, it was a hard time for him... but luckily (for everyone), he didn't give up. 
Thank you for your reviews! 

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