Reviews For The Elements
Reviewer: Once Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03, 2021 10:01 pm Title: Fire VIII
Date: February 03, 2021 10:01 pm Title: Fire VIII
Yay, you! The writing keeps getting better. Hope you are as well
Author's Response: Practice makes perfect, I guess :) Thank you!
Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03, 2021 05:14 pm Title: Fire VIII
Date: February 03, 2021 05:14 pm Title: Fire VIII
The fire vs the sun feels like a solid metaphor for Katy v Pam. She can keep him warm at night but it's still not daytime. He wants the real thing, not some imitation.
Whooo a month down!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you like this metaphor too!
Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03, 2021 10:56 am Title: Fire VIII
Date: February 03, 2021 10:56 am Title: Fire VIII
Oh Jim, even back then you knew that no one would be able to hold a candle to Pam. Nice way to get into his head.
Author's Response: Thank you! I feel so much for him back then...