1 [Report This]Date: February 08, 2021 06:12 am Title: Fire IX
I am terrible at reviewing (for which I apologise), but just to say that I love, love all of these! I am in awe of your ability to say so much and conjure up such powerful images with so few words. I particularly love this one! I definitely feel like it's plausible. And just the right mix of angst/longing/lust/friendship that is very season 1-2 Jim.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much for your kind words! I'm glad that you enjoy my vignettes :)
Date: February 07, 2021 10:42 pm Title: Fire IX
That's the lovesick Jim we know from early on. Trying and failing to avoid what he feels for her. A bit bittersweet here, but still well within character. Nice job.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad he isn't out of character here.
Date: February 07, 2021 10:12 am Title: Fire IX
Ha, fire works on multiple different levels with this one. And yes, much as Jim's love for Pam is pure and motivated by who she is as a fully realized person, it is by no means chaste, and sometimes it's important to recognize that.
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope that this is that situation when unchaste thoughts are appropriate :)