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Reviewer: Basscop69 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 12, 2021 01:26 pm Title: Fire X, Air XII

This was so sweet. I really love the 'they didn't conspire' line (especially with how often Jim and Pam do actually conspire), and both of them independently just wanting to hold onto something that innocent.

Author's Response: Thank you! I guess, at that point, both of them weren't ready to confess to each other how much time spent together meant to them... so, no conspiracy happened :)

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2021 06:57 pm Title: Fire X, Air XII

Yeah that's early seasons right there. However I love the idea they held onto good reminders like this. In a year or so they can let those embers add the warmth of their relationship. Nicely done.

Author's Response: Thank you! I guess they needed that as the office life (especially in the earlier seasons) looked pretty bland... and the way those embers eventually turned into the flame was an awesome bonus for them.

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2021 02:09 pm Title: Fire X, Air XII

Ooooh. The poetry is nice, and I really like the idea of both them, secretly from each other, storing away a little memory of this day... especially given how Pam's ember ends up lighting the flame later on...

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2021 02:09 pm Title: Fire X, Air XII

Ooooh. The poetry is nice, and I really like the idea of both them, secretly from each other, storing away a little memory of this day... especially given how Pam's ember ends up lighting the flame later on...

Author's Response: Thank you! I like the idea of them gathering mementos so very much that I couldn't resist the temptation to include that moment :) 

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