Date: February 23, 2021 07:38 pm Title: Fire XIII
Very good.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
1 [Report This]Date: February 22, 2021 09:09 am Title: Fire XIII
I'm horrible at reviewing so I apologize for that but know that I skip over this fic for a few days so I can binge read the newest updates all at once because I can never get enough of them. But this poem might be my favorite so far, I absolutely adore it to no end. You are a fantastic writer, Dernhelm, I don't know how you do it.
Author's Response: Oh, Aly, thank you so much for your kind words! I appreciate them beyond measure, and I'm happy that my writing brings you joy <3
Date: February 18, 2021 12:40 pm Title: Fire XIII
Love this one. I always loved how she was the only one NOT to name him and yet was the only one who really could.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Bored! I'm glad you enjoyed this vignette :)
1 [Report This]Date: February 16, 2021 09:09 pm Title: Fire XIII
"salty playfulness" is an outstanding way to summarize how the office women see Jim.
"She wasn’t used to sharing her secrets." Great sentence.
Congrats on the streak.
Author's Response: Thank you very much, Once!
Date: February 16, 2021 08:09 pm Title: Fire XIII
Love that even early on Pam does know what she feels for Jim. This has the feeling that this is what she's thinking right before she tamps her feelings down under denial or obligation. Nice work as always.
Author's Response: Thank you! I think that Pam's love for Jim back then consisted of many things, and the physical attraction was one of them. But you're right, she was suppressing them all...
Date: February 16, 2021 08:05 pm Title: Fire XIII
I liked this a lot... and in particular the dual reference of the element to her burning cheeks and, you know, the actual fire that Ryan started.
Author's Response: Thank you! I like it the most when I could tie different meanings to one element :)